George Orwell is one of the greatest authors of all time.
And his editing process will teach you more about writing than an English bachelor’s degree
Let’s dive in…
Many view 1984 as a conspiracy novel that coincidentally aligns with today’s society.
But it’s so much more … and George Orwell’s writing process does not disappoint
Here’s the orignal manuscript of ‘1984’ some of his most best-known work.
This is an adaptation from ‘Nineteen Eighty-Four: The Facsimile of the Extant Manuscript’
A unique chance to see how he tapered one of his most coveted works
Source: The Fiction Desk
Imagery + Intentionality
Every great story needs to spark curiosity.
Here George does this with
• Character features
• Setting structures
• Social constructs
The details keep the reader guessing.
Sentence Breaks + Code Switches
Unique storytelling disrupts conventional thinking patterns to grab the reader’s attention.
George does this with:
- Choppy first lines.
- Descriptive settings.
- UPPER CASE WORDS
Finally
Here’s a look at the published version
Notice the changes
- “…a million radios” becomes simply “the clocks”
- ‘Oh yes I remember’ is gone
- He highlights way more physical features in characters than location
Removes whole paragraphs
Etc.
Editing can be painful but embracing the process is key
George does this by ‘showing the readers not telling the reader
He threads just enough dialogue and imagery in his intro to keep the reader curious
This is a painful lesson that even George had to learn.
If you hate the editing process
• Let your writing live for a few days
• Simplify your wording
• Make large chops
It’s called a process for a reason!